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Hello there my dear Patrons.

First of all, I wanted to say a big thanks for the continued support I've received for Azarinth Healer. I love writing it and bringing you the mostly action packed adventures of Ilea. You know I don't usually bore you with these kind of updates and personal anecdotes but now I thought it necessary.

A gloomy tone, yes, but don't worry. I don't plan to end the story anytime soon. Too many things still yearn to be explored, too many creatures are left unchallenged. Also, my income literally depends on it :P.

However, I've been writing the story for over two years now and sometimes I can't help but miss the simplicity of the early days. When Ilea couldn't teleport out of every situation, when she couldn't regenerate her head or defy creatures of incomprehensible power.

These things are fun, and we certainly needed some time and effort to get there. I do plan to let things fruition, to have fun with coming Evolutions and power spikes. But just as much as Ilea has grown into the absolute monster she is now, I've learned a lot as a writer.

In the past year, I sometimes tried to work on other stories, collecting ideas and building worlds. After a few first chapters, one of which I even shared here, I finally managed to write something I was happy with.

I already submitted the first chapter to Royalroad, where it should be approved soonish. Attached to the post, you'll find EPUB and PDF versions of the first five chapters. I won't post them here separately to make sure you're not hyped by the updates and find nothing related to Azarinth Healer.

If you're interested in a fantasy litrpg with soulslike (dark souls/Bloodborne) and arpg (diablo/PoE) elements blended together into an action slice of life story, do give it a shot and let me know what you think of the beginning.

Now, how is this relevant to Azarinth Healer? Well, I've been thinking about splitting up my time investment into both stories, instead of focusing fully on AH. With it being creative work, I found it's important to me that I try new things and branch out at least a little.

This process is still ongoing and I'm not sure yet how exactly I want to allocate my time. I do believe that it would help my creativity and the quality of both stories, if I at least split it up somewhat. I'm thinking maybe 3 Azarinth chapters per week and 2 Leaves chapters.

The schedule is not yet changed and if I do decide to alter the releases, I'll make sure to inform you all beforehand and would implement them only after the respective next billing period on Patreon. So that you can drop your subscription in case the reduction is too much for you to justify paying money for.

I think that's most of what I wanted to say. Nothing's fully decided yet so let me know about your thoughts and inputs.

Thanks and a good weekend to you all :).


Comments

Anonymous

Ooh nice i will definitely read the other story

Anonymous

Haven't read them yet because I wanna wait till I have some more time, but if this is what you feel is best for you then I say go for it :) always looking for more stories, and if it's up to the quality of AH then I'll be pumped to read it!

MountainFox

I'm the type to eagerly wait for Ghostblade's two chapters a year. As long as you don't compromise on quality I'm in. You may also combine your highest tier for both novels into one so we could read both?

Julien Fellegara

Do what you want but end the plots !

Anonymous

Bro i'm with you till the end, the azarinth healer was beyond a masterpiece for me so i'll support you no matter what

RhaegarRRL

As I said - no intention to end the story anytime soon. There's a lot planned still and the current arc (that has hardly begun) is fully outlined already.

Valter Anunciação

I'm not keeping my pledge if the chapters keep going down. It was 6 then 3 then 5. If it goes back down to 3 I'll just cancel my pledge and go back to rrl.

SoggyBiscuit

It's all good, as long as Leaves of Terranthir is enjoyable I wouldn't mind the schedule split.

RhaegarRRL

Perfectly understandable. I will inform you all if actual changes are coming up to make sure you can cancel beforehand :).

Anonymous

Do you plan on splitting the patreon ? For example one tier for AH, another for leaves, another for both? (Or a variation on that theme) Might be better for readers coming from royalroad but I'm mainly asking for existing readers that might only be interested in AH for example.

Anonymous

More stories for me to enjoy so that's a plus. I have no problem with waiting a bit longer for chapters.

Anonymous

Good fucking god I’m so excited.

Anonymous

I haven't read the new story yet, but I totally support the change if that's what you want/need. AH is awesome and I will continue to read it, but I'm also excited to read the new one.

Mislandor

I am good with other stories. As long as the schedule is steady and I am not left hanging!

Sebastian Prue

As much as I adore AH I fully support you branching into a different story and will definitely read Leaves as well

Azulmar

Looking forward to the story. I love our adventures with Ilea and while my greedy little zergling heart would love nothing more than double chapters seven days a week rationally I know variety can be very healthy for a author and their stories. I have no doubt the new story will be entertaining and have us begging for more chapters in no time.

Anonymous

I wouldn't change the schedule and dedicate that much time to it, until the new story is more established and deeper into it. I'm also excited to read it, and I'm sure it will be great, but...it's currently a unknown quantity. People don't like the unknown over what they know. Wait until it's a known quantity before making such a dramatic schedule change.

Anonymous

Normally i start raving like a madman if an author i like does this. But i kind of like the synopsis and trust in your writing skills. Still feel like you could throw us a boon and go 4 3. Or at least stay at 6 chapters total a weak. Having a smurf(second) story should probably aleviate some writers block.

Thransk

My general thoughts on a creator's decision to pursue other projects is that it is vital to the ongoing and improved quality of their work as a whole. Writing another story may lower the number of chapters of AH a week, but I also believe that the quality of those chapters will increase on the back of diversifying your writing portfolio. Even if Leaves is a flop, which I doubt, it's still a learning experience that can only help AH in the long run.

Nodlehs

I'd say go for it, but maybe a 1-2-1 schedule for AH then 1 or 2 for Leaves... It's just too nice having 2 AH chapters on at least one update day

Anonymous

Go ahead. I’ve seem plenty of authors say in the past, that for sanity, every author should have more than one story. The most prolific LitRPG and Haremlit authors I know have 3-4 sometimes 6-7.

RhaegarRRL

I'm not 100% on that yet but I don't think I will alter the tiers, other than providing advance chapters for Leaves. If it ends up with 12 Azarinth chapters per month, I think 5$ is still appropriate, yet I do understand if people don't feel that way.

Caanbo

If this story is portal fantasy am down for it . I would hate this story would take more chapter from us💔

RhaegarRRL

That was the planned approach and I agree with you that it would be the more sensible one. But I found it difficult investing time into something that hasn't even been posted yet, both simply time wise and from a motivational point.

just_a_potato

You've been a quality writing machine for as long as I've been a patron. You said 1-3 chapters a week while you were doing civil service and did 3 minimum every week. If this is what you want/need to stay sharp, DO IT.

Anonymous

oof male mc there's so many action stories with male MCs already out there, dunno

Anonymous

I'm with @Thransk in support of your decision. Not that I could change it anyway. 😉 At least we won't need to wait for five years, like fans of a certain fantasy series.

Straven

Not dropping and I for one am already excited just hearing about the types this new story have in it with you as the author! I'm honestly a bit happy to hear your branching out into new areas/stories, a good author usually finds themselves writing more then one story through there lives and you've made one hell of a start with AH and I can only hope this one might take off almost or equally as well as AH did. Best of luck!

Grond (James)

Would it be possible to have certain tiers for different stories? Say $5 for only Azarinth Healer and $10 for both

Anonymous

I've been kind of expecting something like this. I really like AH a *lot* but it's entirely reasonable to want/need to branch out and try fresh things. Your writing has certainly improved, and I'm sure it will continue to do so. I've only started the new excerpt, but the writing initially shows advances in terms of both style and technique. Time to get some coffee and settle in to enjoy it! wheeeee!

Anonymous

I'm glad to see you are branching out instead of letting yourself burn out. I don't mind authors who do that to keep them going. Thanks for keeping us informed instead of just switching things up.

Anonymous

I really like AH and would prefer as many chapters per week allotted towards this story. Just my selfish input

MacDB

You do what makes you happy, big fan of AH so if you think it’s best for your creativity then go for it, I’ll continue to support your story. Hopefully I’ll enjoy your new one aswell

Noah

First time writing a comment, been reading since chapter 100. I love AH, but to be honest, the first 100 or 200 chapters were the best. Not because you‘ve gotten worse with writing or something, exactly the opposite actually. All I wanted to say: I‘d love to have a new story to spice things up, as long as you continue to write AH :)

Noah

And I‘d continue to pay, even if you‘d only write 2 chapters per week on AH, just saying.

Michael scott

I know exactly what you mean. The early days of most stories are usually the best. Setting up what is to come is my favorite part. I took a couple of minutes to think about how I felt about less chapters is AH. While on the surface I don't like that. I'll still be getting 12 chapters a month and that is plenty, plus I'll get the new story too. 10 dollar a month is literally nothing to me. So I will continue to support your writing efforts. And I look forward to reading your new story. On a personal note I plan on having a fantastic weekend.

Luciaron

Looking forward to reading the new story, those are some beefy looking chapters.

Joe ?

i don't like the idea of missing out on AH chapters, but I remember watching your writing style develop over the course of AH and I think it would be interesting to see how you handle a new story.

Anonymous

I do love AH and honestly, I'm always waiting for the next chapters, but I do understand that you want to do some different stuff. I you think you need it and your writing will profit from it then do it. I sure will have a look into the new story you have started cuz, obviously I do enjoy your writing a lot. But I think it would be only fair, that if you change your release schedule to 3 AH and 2 Leaves chapter/week, you then also start another tier on Patreon for AH only which would be a bit cheaper.

Anonymous

I've read the chapters you put at the bottom of the update. I think they look good, but I can't say anything about the new system as I've only seen that dying costs you 100 essence.

Jackson Ragland

I wholly support you branching out.

Anonymous

Between Identify, "Divine Sense", Troll-regeneration, functionally 0 travel-time, teleportation and outgrowing the team you've hit on pretty much every lit-rpg mechanic that makes things difficult for writers and yet somehow I still really enjoy reading you story. Tbh for me your writing is continuously saving kinda mediocre world building, lit-rpg development and as a consequnce even plot. So a new story is exactly what I want, if you can avoid the same pitfalls it's gonna be amazing.

Han Pol

While I don't like the first chapters that much jet, the outlook is pretty good. So will continue reading and looking what we get. speaking of Poe while I hope that he will get stronger in time and manage to lean more and get better gear (one of the few deficiency in AH) I hope that the power of an Aurastacker or herald of thunder asasin with Storm secret or the like will not be reached anytime soon.

Sean Ulrich

Go for it! It’s important to enjoy your writing!

Deinos

Even without having read them yet I'm all for it. The reason is I believe in quality over quantity and if this helpa you in any way to thrive then that's only good for me as a reader.

mpop

Haven't read the chapters yet, but if you feel you need to diversify go for it. We can survive having slightly fever chapters of AH per month.

closeded

Souls-like action slice-of-life sounds cool, ill give it a read. There was an arc in Galactic Fist of Legend, but other than that, I can't think of any souls like litrpg.

Han Pol

Kinda disagree there are around 28000 storries on RR around 800 of them finished and around 2600 who are updated fairly regularly while around 5% of them are really long like AH and even then it's in the upper bracket of those and ~5% will be finished ones they reach novel length. most stories end before the Author ever has problems with the power the MC earned and if they do most often it's just a powerfantasy then and the MC a merry sue that didn't earn the power but got a cheat or glitch ability early on or a divine intervention in their favor. I really love the stories were one actually feels that the Mc made some good and original gains, and earned the power gained. A battle like in the Storm or blast them chapter would feel only a tenth as awsome if it wasn't for her terror in the first basilic cave, or the first praetorian. And most Litrp's never get to those battles. But agree that 12 chapters a month is enough

Hunter Dupuis

I personally like the idea of a new story, the starting point of a new story is always exciting.

OpN

I'll support you till I can't.

Endoria

How about a 4/2 split?`The increased creativity should be visible in an increased output :P :P Jokes aside, if you can move all the AH chapters to the Saturday release, that would be best I think. I already really dislike the single Thursday chapter, because 1 chapter really does not cut it for my insatiable thirst for more reading.

Zarik0

Sad but well better than you burn out, so go as you feel, and off course i say more AH the max you can :P

Knight Axel

I like it! Can't wait to read more. Have fun dude!

Albedo's Ahoge

:( Sad indeed but like Zarik said, it's still better than an author burn out. I will need to find something to read to replace the lost chapters.

Terry Stevens

I kind of want to say ‘piss off’ when you put about dropping the subscription. Like we are just supporting you for the quantity of releases, not the quality of your writing. Maybe have some more faith that we will support you in all of your endeavours, however you need to go about it. So long as you don’t drop AH, and leave us high and dry, then I say, hoorah.

Endoria

Just tried reading the chapters. The whining bitch MC is a real downer. Cannot really say I am interested in reading about him.

Anonymous

Oh snap! I understand the partial burnout because of continuous AH production. However I doubt very much it can be healed by splitting your attention to another story. IMHO you can end up dropping both ones eventually. Will keep my pledge as long as there is new AH content and willing to increase it if additional side stories are produced. Cannot say that I am a fan of new story, right now, introduction was a bit convoluted and did not make me to care for MC. I'll try to re-read it later to see if it changes. Would be happy if patreons were split and stories kept separately.

Anonymous

Yeah, was refreshing to read the adventures of someone who's not an utter moron and whines about everything back when AH started. The decision to now start a second story with exactly the same shite everyone else does, seems kinda illogical. Souls - themed litrpg is a good idea, just not with a standard moron MC that just lucks into success!

RhaegarRRL

I get all that and your suggestion is what I initially planned anyway. But it's less about what's most efficient / least annoying for you guys and more about what I can handle and need atm.

RhaegarRRL

Thanks, I appreciate the comment. I know many won't drop the subscription but I also wanted to say that I completely understand it if they do.

Anonymous

NOOOOOOO! My AH chapies! I will miss the rate of release, but honestly, I totally get how writing a new story could be so important. I don't think I'd be able to drop this. Didn't even during those months of public service, and really if G. Harthane is writing something else, my fan boy ass is giving it a shot.

Anonymous

I'm looking forward to something new as well. Ilea is great, but it has been getting a little stale. Her practical invincibility has basically turned the story into a strange slice of life story. Which I still appreciate, but something new might also give some inspiration for Azarinth Healer as well. Regardless, you are a great authr and I'm looking forward to whatever you put out.

Michael C

It did not spark joy. Why go with a male main? 99.99% books are male. This guy seems autistic? Is he suicidal? What is with the inner monolog of being worthless and noone missing him? Who is Baxter? The friend who gave him basic life advice? The weird focus on getting a dog? The world is interesting and I like the equipment and stats. Castle town seems clever way to dungeon dive. Maybe I would have done a rouge dungeon where its all different after death. Anyway. I like AH because I care about Ilea and the loose ends. However. It took 100+ chapters on RR tonget me attached enough to pay for her. This guy is maybe a KU read...maybe.

Michael C

I reread my coment and it came across pretty abrupt. Sorry but I am on mobile and not used to typing a lot. To clarify. Your writing style has improved a lot in the years. Its well written. My main point was not super clear. I want to clarify. You are the only author I have joined their page. I have stayed here for a year or more? Months and months at least. I see AH different than the other litrpg books I have read. I follow you because I am invested in Ilea and she is unique. I care about your world and magic system. I want to know what happens. To ME, AH is like World of Warcraft. Its the mega mmo I always play. Other litrpg are like new mmo's I check out and abandon. Almost no authors are able to keep a story going. To make the world real at higher levels. Everyone understands the first 10 levels of DnD.. But trying to find a good campaign at level 18 is hard...but so satisfying when you find the unicorn DM. You are my current favorite DM. Now you want me to follow you from DnD to Tunnels And Trolls and start over. All of that aside. What you have with AH is unique. You could make an RPG from it. You could sell merch, get other writers to flesh out other travlers. Spin offs, anime. I don't love your new story. The character is nothing special. You are competing against all the complete books and series that popup on KU weekly. When you started AH on RR you hit the perfect time to introduce a female lead. To capture an audience. IMO. That won't happen in this new flooded market with your new story. To me it seems you are taking a succesful franchise that is not tapped, and spinning to start a new product in a saturated market. I would love to see you add a new traveler in the same world. Or at least do something special with your need to write new stuff. Another 20s-30s male? Project manager? Self estime issues? Internal monolog, sigh. Do you know I bought the last Land book even though I knew it was mediocre? I don't care about A.Kong and the drama. I love the world he created and want to see what happens next. That drive to see what happens next is why I am here. What impact will Ilea have on the world. What is across the ocean, what is haplening on earth? I simply don't think the new story will spark that. Sorry if this comes across wrong. So slow to type it on a small screen. You have to do what you need to be creative. But when you say you are splitting time for a new story that worries me. Not everyone can carry a growth story forward forever. I hope. you can do it a lot longer though. You must be making almost 10k a month on this story. Not many authors hit the sweet spot. Anyway. Just wanted to give my feedback. I am just one of 1000s, so you will have a lot of different feedback to consider. Thanks for letting me just dump thid out. I really dont me it to be rude.

kyle

Hmm my take is....go for it I liked it enough that I would read it as long as he progresses past his self esteem issues in my first read. I like the world building for sure, so far. Tbh I probably wouldn't want to start reading this untill you had a 100 or chapters up. In short cutting AH back to 3 a week would be ok with me and eventually I'd love to read this one as well.

Anonymous

For the last 6 months there has been changes and variability that makes me a bit worried. If AH is making you miserable i think this is exactly the kind of 'feeler' an author would extend to their biggest fans to check the reaction. I sincerely hope that you're not trying to measure your mental wellbeing and potential economic loss against eachother! If i get wind of you not taking proper care of yourself, that's how you'd lose my patreon support.

Anonymous

I would prefer you simply post the chapters to your Patreon, that is what your account is for after all

Anonymous

Regardless of the impact on the AH releases, I'm thrilled to read this new story ! Well to be fair I didn't like the MC too much for reasons others have already stated ... But I feel like you have lots of nice things in store for this story, the new world you are building certainly has lots of potential. And after all lets not forget you very rarely did dissapoint with Azarinth Healer :) I'm looking forward to more of it !

Anonymous

I understand why you want to branch out, and write something new. There is obviously nothing anyone can do to force you to keep writing anything you dont want to. However, as you yourself said, your income depends on the pledges that people who like your story AH donate to you, and saying that you intend to reduce the ammount of AH is possibly a dangerous move in that sense. Looking back at a good example is the author who wrote "The Iron Teeth: A Goblins Tale", as soon as he ended his story, he lost most of his patreons (he still writes, but nothing he's written since has been good/interesting enough to warner the ammount of attention that A Goblins Tale did, and his revenue from Patreon suffered for it). Now, im not saying that will happen to you, and you also said you dont intend to end AH for a long time, but the chance is still there that your income might be reduced due to: 1. People not being interested in your new story 2. AH fans not feeling like the reduced chapters each week is worth their pledge (you already cut the ammount from 6 to 5 not "that" long ago). 3. You burning out from writing two different stories (im not an author, so i dont know if thats harder or easier than focusing on one). My point with writing all this isnt to tell you what to do, its just to line up possible consequences of your choices regarding what you write and how much you write. I've been a long time pledger, and will probably keep my pledge as long as the AH story goes strong, but as soon as some other story becomes your main focus? Thats probably when i will end my pledge and look for something else. Thank you for reading

Anonymous

Oh, you meant literally souls like, I'll give it a fair chance then, while I go off to this corner to lament the lack of badass female leads. Edit: All that said, I don't really know if you have any tangible long term goals for Ilea, or if you are just writing whatever feels like it makes sense, or something in between the two, but if you are getting disillusioned with the direction the story is going, it might be a good idea to sit down with yourself and figure out a long term plan, a general route of how to get there from where you are currently at. Because to me, right now, and I'm not saying it is like that, but it kinda looks to me like you are not entirely sure how to proceed, there is definitely one long term goal in duking it out with some ascendant but level wise that's a long ways away and it seems like you're kind running out of room for sensible places to put actual challenges for Ilea. And suddenly merking her å sikkert dimensional traveller seems kinda contrived, unless you managed to bake it into the next evolution of her third class or something... Perhaps that was your plan with making it spatial themed now that I think about it, so nevermind. Either way I think Ilea should go on an adventure soon pocky so much content available on eating cake and training minileas

Anonymous

For me that depends how it holds up, if he cans AH for it, I'm out, no matter what, if I don't like it, I'm out when AH ends, if it can grip me as much as AH does, I'll probably stick around. With that said, I think most people can vouch for the fact that keeping up two projects at the same time rarely ends well. And less AH would just be a bummer in general. There's a reason it's practically the only story I found on rrl I consistently follow, and that is the only thing I support on patreon.

Jacob

I like it looking forward to more

Anonymous

I think a compromise could be to write a new character, in AH's world. Someone who doesnt know Ilea at all, but who sometimes comes in contact with people and events which have been influenced by Ilea. It would be like an extended side story in a sense. You wouldnt need to build a new world, the borders and rules are already set, but you could write a new character, new personalities, and a new adventure or journey. Doing it that way, you can explore your own world in the eyes of someone not as powerful or driven as Ilea, and possibly flesh out some parts of the world that Ilea either didnt experience, or didnt care to explore. I think this would probably be an idea worth looking into before you shift your focus to a new story. Its probably the best chance you have to keep you hardcore AH fans happy, while also writing something new, with minimum risk financially.

Anonymous

My main problem with the new story is that at first glance it’s looking very generic. There are tons of different options out there if you want “male MC dropped into game world” and so far there’s nothing too obviously unique about the new story. Not 100% sure if I’d drop the Patreon at 3/week. It would be nice to have a $3 option for that that excludes the new story, but I understand that would be a big hit, at least initially.

Anonymous

Go for it. But male mc bruh

Anonymous

Yeah very much agree with that. It feels like the story is moving way slower now than before, even with 5 chapters a week. With the same rythm at 3 chapters a week it'll slow down to a crawl.

Anonymous

Long time AH follower here. I rarely comment on anything. I'd say 2 AH chapters and 2 of the other a week is fine for me personally. I have a special section in my emails just for this story. I'll check out the other one soon.

Anonymous

Maybe think about nerfing her through a different plain or zone or possibly changing up her class to remove her nigh invulnerability to death. Tbh lately she's basically unlikable

Shukketsu

Just as a kind of warning from me. I will most likly end my patronage somewhere in the following months, not because of the Story or this news but because I move out from my parents so money will be tight in the beginning. When I can afford it I will return

Anonymous

Nerfing will cause more people to drop the story than reduced chapters

Endoria

Going from the confident Ilea to this nerd with self esteem issues is really going to hurt. I'd rather have more AH chapter.

Anonymous

this new one may attract an entirely diff group of readers, once it gets going, I suppose, based on reactions so far. It's actually a bit like one I'm working on in a few respects...except for being completely different in every detail, style, setting, etc, ofc :). Really, the only similarity is both arguably feature a sort of anti-Ilea type char. I generally argue for write what you want/need to...but so many promising new starts are abandoned on RR that obviously some compromise balancing discipline and enthusiasm is needed to succeed. You don't have an issue w/ that; there's a ton of AH and I've been happily amazed at the constant, consistent output. I don't know how much I'll like the new story, new MC, new world because it's so new, but the odds are good I'll like it, so I'm open to whatever you chose to do. We know you can make credible, likable characters, and that you understand pacing, worldbuilding, etc. so the odds seem good that this will be fun despite/because of the MC's rough start. A quirk of mine is that I generally prefer the beginnings of almost all stories; when they are fresh and clean and often a bit less dark. Complication piled on complication with ever escalating dire disasters...gets old. At least for me. AH doesn't have an issue w/ this almost by design, which is one of the many reasons I enjoy it. PG2E has become just a horrid slog of endless desperation and political issues, although it was once my favorite serial. But it remains one of the top ranked; eveyone has diff prefs! :)

Anonymous

The only story on RR that I actually follow and even pay for and most likely it will remain the only one. I've read hundreds of fantasy novels (D&D, Forgotten Realms, Tolkien, GoT, King's Dark Tower and so on ). Yet, of all the novels I've read, I could hardly name one or two that I enjoyed as much as I enjoy this story. The way I see it, you managed to create a world which can be expanded almost endlessly and you did so in a way that creates a very pleasant feeling of never-ending adventure. You also managed to balance the avdenturing / slice of life / politics parts of the story quite well, not to mention that this is the only LITRPG where the whole "system, leveling, skills etc" doesn't make me "cringe" myself to death. In fact I quite enjoy it. Maybe diving a bit deeper into politics / inner workings of certain orders, guilds and Lys and character drama / development would be nice, especially when it comes to side characters. Although with all the things going on in the story and all the characters, I can see how it can be a challenge just to keep track of all the characters we've been introduced to so far. Another thing I find extremely pleasing is that the MC is not your typical cliche hero/good guy type of a character, triggering deus ex machina with every second step they take. But a badass girl with a rather lovable, believable personality and "goals". Having tried reading dozens of stories on RR, Ilea does stand out among the stale and cliche protagonists. She is by far one of my favorite MCs even when it comes to bestseller novels. (Yes, yes she is op and got lucky here and there but its a power fantasy not a shakespearean drama after all.) Anyway, I think you've been writing something very unique and wonderful here. And again, I could hardly name more than a few novels that felt this addictive and I'm sure many people here and on RR would share the same opinion. Sure, there are a couple of things that need some further ironing such as the grammar here and there. (Not that I'm native speaker , lol.) But this doesn't make the story an less enjoyable. So yeah, it would be a shame to see the chapters drop in number, especially when I think about all the things waiting to be explored in the world of Elos and levels to be gained by Ilea just to make whole kingdoms shit their pants when she walks through their cities with four marks above her head:) On the other hand, it is absolutely understandable that you wish to try new things, have new experiences, and challenges or simply got a bit tired of a certain "hobby" even if you (hopefully)mostly enjoy it. Of course in the end the only thing that really matters is that you do what you like to do. I wish you luck with your other project, although I do hope that we'll see another 500 (hopefully 1000+) chapters of AH, and one day an increase in the number of weekly chapters:)

BurnNote

I like the idea of a soulslike litrpg. That's good. I've not really been gripped by the story so far, but AH took a while to differentiate from generic fantasy too. I liked the previous story on RR with the bloodmage, though that one feels like an AH prototype in a lot of ways. But I'm willing to see where it goes. I'm not super interested in the main character right now, but again, I'm willing to see if he grows on me. I'm not super fond of reducing the rate of AH to 3 a week for this story on an emotional basis, but I can see the reasoning, and I'll get with it if I actually get into the new story .

Endoria

Soulslike litRPG is just depressing. What is the point? Especially with this idiot of a protagonist, I do not see this being successful. I sure as hell do not want to trade AH chapter for this.

RhaegarRRL

Eh, I always explained the changes. Civic duty was out of my hands and the reduction to 5 chapters was mostly a comfort thing because I was often working weekends (so yes - a decision to put my mental health first). And this decision is along those lines too. I think if I was miserable writing AH, you'd notice pretty quickly :P.

John Scott

I’m on mobile and lost a long detailed post, so this is a bit abbreviated. First, do right by you. If writing a new novel is what you need, do that. Don’t let fans dictate your personal well-being. On the new novel, I had trouble sympathizing with the MC, and that made the more introspective segments annoying. I like to know more about a character and have a sense of their starting point before they bottom out and grow as a person. Compare to AH, where you started before the transmigration, I found myself much more sympathetic is her existential moments. Furthermore, Ilea’s sarcasm kept the tone lighter and her constant determination and goal oriented mentality provided a tangible sense of progress that the other story lacked. Again, do right by yourself. I’ll still be a patron for three or fewer AH chapters. But don’t abandon something great for something “original”. I might read an original story with a unique setting for 40 chapters. But I have been captivated by Azarinth Healer for hundreds because you have balanced power progression and lasting friendships, because there is a strong sense of adventure and exploration that is exciting to read, because you have fashioned the fascinating dichotomy of how human Ilea is with how inhuman she has become. So whatever you end up doing, thank you for that.

BurnNote

Now that is just a really shallow take. Failure is inevitable, yes. But so is success, so long as you don't give up. The world is broken, yes. But you're an outsider, it's not your broken world, so just take in the beauty that still remains, and consider the remaining glories of the past. And when you've done so, make it your own and choose another direction. The Soulsborne series can be grim, but it's never hopeless. As for the protagonist? Ilea pissed herself in the in the second chapter. That doesn't mean this one will become a good protag. It does mean it's to early to judge. If you don't like it, then that's fine. Personal taste is a thing. I'd be perfectly fine with AH alone for a few hundred more chapters. But I'm willing to give the author credit, and see where this goes.

RhaegarRRL

Hey, I appreciate anybody that supports the story and me :). You don't need to explain yourself for pledging or not pledging.

RhaegarRRL

Appreciate the comment. Yeah, I know plenty of people already hate the MC :P. We'll see. Not everybody will like everything.

RhaegarRRL

Appreciate the write up :). Yeah, we'll see how it goes. As I said, I have no intention of stopping anytime soon.

Matthias

honestly, it's fine to focus on other things. I'm actually surprised that it took you this long to start something else, to keep you from burning out on the thing that pays your rent. It's entirely unreasonable to expect an author to only work on the one story you yourself like, so in my opinion, this shouldn't even be an issue, no matter what anyone says. you do you, and people should just deal with that. and if you ever do decide to finish this story, it'll be and even worse situation. you'd suddenly be down to writing a new story that no one has any connection with, and you revenue could drop near-catastrophically from one month to the next. like this, you start a following and get to retain a lot of support after either one finishes. something about eggs and baskets, really. That's just my honest opinion though. as I said, you do you. keep up the good work

Anonymous

I have been reading AH for a long time. I am all for you working on a second work. I am a huge fan of your writing and think it would be great to have two ongoing stories. But please, I am begging you, not this story. It is not good. I am not even comparing it to AH. I am reading it as if I found a random story from an author I had not heard of on RR. I would have dropped this story after reading these 5 chapters if I found it on RR.

Anonymous

Fantastic new story. I'm very intrigued. Work on what you want to work on and the quality will follow. That's why I back you, the artist, on this platform.

Bob

"tells" instead of "shows" the emotions of your new MC. That's a big ol fat "no" for me. Why would you write like that?

Anonymous

I'm a huge fan of AH. The only story I support on Patreon at the moment. If the chapters reduce I'll continue my pledge just probably change tier. Having read the first 5 chapters I don't see myself continuing to read the Leaves story. I'm uncertain if it's the setting, the MC, the system or what but something about the story just isn't working for me. Currently I'd rate that story as a 3/5 maybe. The internal thoughts break the story a bit for me. The crypticness of those internal thoughts, he thinks about a bunch of different people/dog and we have no basis for who those people are or that one is a dog until surprise it's a dog. It seems like it's trying to start off all mysterious and it just comes across that you the author are hiding things rather than just letting us in on the real past of the character. It was a bit of a slog to get through the 5 chapters and that says a lot to me. I'm curious as to what about this story, over others that you wrote, has you drawn in and wanting to continue this one?

Anonymous

As far as I am concerned $5/month for 3 chapters a week is a good deal. A few other Patreons that i have been supporting do 10 for 5 a week. Its not like AH chapters are small. Don't get me wrong i am probably addicted to AH, i find it to be an amazing and high quality story and would be sad to see chapters reduced. However it isn't such a drastic difference that i would change my current support for the author. Who knows, Leaves might just as amazing.

MrrC

As a fan of AH, I will change tiers. The change is a major one as the previous number of chapters was 6 chapters per week (24 per month) - which was dropped to 20, and now to 12. This means that you've effectively doubled the price of each tier. At 560 chapters in - the investment made by the readers is a serious one. No interest in the new series - the only interest is in seeing where you take AH.

Anonymous

Anyone else have issues with the epub where the entire document is underlined?

Anonymous

I don't know yet if I'll like tge new story, but I have hopes for it so looking forward to reading it!!!

Anonymous

I'm happy you have a new story and enjoy writing it, from the first 5 you've posted I'm not interested. Yet. Most things I tend to read on RR need to have 4-500+ pages before I consider starting them. I know its a high bar to set, but it shows a dedication to the story that a lot of people on 'trending' just don't keep up. Seeing AH cut back will be sad as I've only become a patreon supporter earlier this year. Personally I dislike the darksoul's games and all their clones. I understand why people like them, but I'm old enough now to not want to waste my time grinding out fights. So the ties to those games is large turn off for me. However I understand lots of people Do love these games. Frankly just keep writing Harthane, you've struck gold once with AH. Maybe you can even hook me on this new story.

自由

I like the idea of a new story, but I personally didnt't find anything in the first few chapters interesting or eyecatching. I would have probably stopped reading right around here.

Thaabit Rivertree

First let me say you've clearly improved since starting AH, and it shows. However, I don't like the new story. It's premise and plot are too simplistic/incomplete. It feels like you're describing a video game more than reading a novel, and it felt fairly bland/vanilla. Why? Just one character who is exploring a single castle with no rhyme or reason. There is no meaning to it, because he's alone. No story, no characters, no relationships, no purpose, just use items and don't die. Why? Because dying is bad, even though there's nothing that gives his *life* purpose. In other words, nothing gives his *struggle* purpose (besides 'dying is bad'). He has no inkling about why or where he is, and doesn't have any clues either. He has no realistic means or hope to return to his previous life. He has no realistic and meaningful goals to aim for, besides those related directly to 'don't die'. At least with AH, we didnt know why she was sent, but there was a whole world around her where she could discover and create meaning, by being part of it. It also felt like you focused on all the nitty gritty bits related to his supplies and medical care. To me, that's just not that interesting. On a side note, I think you could focus a little less on the character learning the basics of the 'system' that all the readers are familiar with, and more on the plot. I also didn't like how the character's thoughts seemed disassociated with himself, as if they were two different people. This was mostly in chapter 1 where the thoughts are commands that generally seem calm and at odds with the characters negative jittery cowardice. The commands almost seem as if they're coming from another person. This dissonance also happens when the thoughts are addressing 'you.' If there really are two entities, throw us a clue. Otherwise, I think you should make it so his thoughts are more consistent (i.e. make them all or mostly first person). For example, 'i need to x!', or 'I should just x.' You're sentence structure and general style seemed much smoother, but the things I mentioned about the plot are my main issues. Basically, I'm not interested in it so if you reduce AH chapters significantly, I wont feel as though I'm getting the same value... At 3 AH chaps a week I would probably be a patron for fewer months out of the year. You're one of the few people I do pay for, and that's in large part because of the great value. I would suggest, if possible, making a separate patreon for separate stories. It looks like your audiences for these differing styles are not going to be the same. Maybe once you get a decent following in the other story, you could reduce AH chapters more easily, if that's what you wanted. I don't recommend putting multiple stories on one patreon. I have never been a fan of this and I always feel like I'm overpaying, or paying for something I don't want/need, cause I have yet to find an author whom I'm interested in supporting for multiple stories. It's always the one (story) that I like, which makes sense, cause they probably wrote the other story to write something *different*. I think you definitely have the ability to write (another) great story, but this one just misses some key notes to me. That's my two cents at least. Maybe some other people would like it. 🤷🏼‍♂️

OpN

Why does Adrians dagger keep slipping out of his hand, is he lightly gripping this letter opener? It's slipped out of his hands three times now. He should find something to tie his weapons to his hands because his grip is shit.

OpN

Another note, I dislike characters in LitRPG novels being the ones who are almost completely unfamiliar with video-games. As an enthusiast of both, it's frustrating to read from the perspective of a complete novice and barely familiar/knowledgeable person. It's like reading about babies first steps. So I personally have problems with Adrian and his personality as shown so far. I get that it's more relatable and that someone who's familiar with games or rpgs won't be as fun as someone who's learning for the first time, allowing the author to explain their systems naturally, but I can't relate to the MC and don't feel a connection to his plight.

Endoria

I do not think it is relatable at all. We are not living in 1980 where computer nerds had to be tech wizards, because computers were real sub-culture phenomenon, that spawned movies like "Wargames". These days everyone knows games and the protagonist seems absolutely unrelatable and unrealistic. If he is a miserable lowner without much social interaction, what was he doing with his time? He is the perfect candidate for a shut-in gamer, flubby around the belly, short breathe and unhealthy diet ... but oblivious what games are? come on ... really?

Anonymous

i think the first 5 chapters lack a compelling enough hook. Yeah he's in a another world and he can't die but i feel there is nothing truly eye catching about him. It just feels too normal for fantasy stories you know.

Anonymous

Well, I'll be honest. If you @G. Harthane decide to go ahead with the new project and subsequent changes to Azarinth Healer release schedule, I'd like you to consider a suggestion of mine that would keep it fair for those of us who are on the fence about reading, or perhaps even supporting the new story on a monetary level: If you do decide to go through with it, please make a new patreon profile for the new story. Simply put, I'm not sure I want to keep reading the new project, and hence I'm quite sure I do not want to support it on a monetary level just yet. I like Azarinth Healer enough that I wouldn't drop it on patreon even if the release frequency went down, but honestly I would be a bit disgruntled about having to remain at the same pledge level as before while only getting half the chapters I am used to getting for said pledge.

Anonymous

I find the Leaves to be interesting. Plenty of mystery in the beginning.