Having trouble with this chapter (Patreon)

This chapter is kicking my butt.

I knew what I wanted in this chapter right after I posted the last one. The problem is every time I type a scene out and reread it, it just comes off wrong to me.

I'm going to be working on it the rest of the night, but I don't see myself having it done until tomorrow.

I want to say I'll have another chapter out on Sunday, but I won't make that promise until I get your feedback on the chapter I'm working on now.

Wish me luck.