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My arms tense.

My eyes narrow.

I pull back my arms while digging my feet into the forest floor.

I yell, exhaling the large breath I've just drawn in, and swing my new axe in a downwards diagonal strike. This time I won't mess up!

My muscles tense just as my strike is about to hit my target.

When I hear the bark crack from the tree I'm swinging at; I immediately know I failed again.

“Gods damn it!” I swear in frustration.

“Language, Aaliyah,” my mom tells me for the hundredth time today.

Mom reprimanding me is another blow to my pride, but the giggles from my other onlookers are what really kill me.

"I don't see why you're mad about hitting the tree," Sandra pokes fun at me, knowing what I'm trying to do. "Axes are meant to fell trees, aren't they?" She asks sarcastically.

"Now, dear, you shouldn't make fun of her flaws even when they're so obvious.” I can’t tell if Sarette is really reprimanding her daughter or just taking a shot at me like everybody else.

I had to start coming out here into the woods to train with my new weapons because Camden said I was distracting the villagers with my practicing.

I was hoping to train alone today, but Sandra and Sarette stopped by our house after mom and I finished our morning run together. My friend and her mom wanted to see how I was doing since I spent a whole week forging my new weapons with my master. Today is my third day off from the forge and the last day before I go back to start working on my armor.

I'd tried to tell them we could talk later in the day after practicing with my new weapons for a few hours, but I should've known that wouldn't work. And mother, of course, didn't want to be left out, so she joined the impromptu girls club and followed me into the woods to watch me train. Hence my current predicament.

The three ladies have been critiquing each of my swings since I started.

Usually, I'd be happy to show off in front of my friends and family, but this time is different.

I was so happy to practice with my new axe and war-hammer, I spent my first day off from work swinging away with everything I had. That's when I noticed I missed one crucial detail about my new weapons.

Though they are on the heavier side, I can still lift my weapons with my stats. The problem comes when I swing them. Both my axe and war-hammer are top-heavy, and even with my Strength, the momentum from my swings is enough to drag me along with them. Widening my stances has improved my control a little, but not anywhere close to where I need it to be.

That's why I'm practicing swinging my axe at this tree. I'm trying to perform a full swing while stopping my strike before it actually touches the bark of the tree. People think of the axe as a brutal weapon that you just swing with all your might, but that is what will get you killed in a real battle.

I know I could solve my problem by practicing with some heavy armor on, but the armor I'm designing with mom will at most weigh forty pounds. My armor would need to weigh almost three times that amount to compensate for my weapon's momentum.

All of this has led to me making dozens of minute changes to my stances, trying to figure out a way for me to compensate for my lack of weight. I never thought I would wish that I was heavier.

“Your comments aren’t helping,” I hiss at my onlookers.

“Can I try holding it?” Sandra asks, stepping forward. “I put a few spare points into Strength once or twice.”

"Fine, I need a small break anyway." I hold out the large axe with both of my hands. Sandra firmly grabs the weapon with a smile on her face. I notice she isn't holding it correctly to support its weight, but I'm content to watch how this plays out after all her heckling. "You ready?" She nods her head, and I let go.

“Shit!” Sandra screams. Her entire body locks up, straining to balance the heavy weapon. “How do you swing this thing!?” She grunts.

I reach out and take my axe back before she accidentally drops it and chops her foot off. "I thought you said you put some of your points into Strength," I tease Sandra. Mom and Sarette share a giggle, for once not at my expense.

“I’ll have you know; I have a solid 25 in Strength. I was the strongest amongst my master’s pupils,” Sandra proclaims, folding her arms in front of her.

"That's pretty good," I say in a sarcastic voice. "Now you just need six times that, and we'll be twins." Everyone here is practically family, so I don't mind bragging a little.

“Your Strength stat is 150! That’s ridiculous,” she says in disbelief.

I easily heft my axe onto my shoulder and smile at her. "It's a little higher than that, but yeah," I can't help but flex a little to show off after all the crap they've been giving me since I started practicing.

Sandra shakes her head in a disapproving manner. "If only you focused on your magic skills as I suggested, you'd be as great a mage as my master is."

Scoffing at Sandra’s remark, I increase the circulation of my mana network. Like I’d let Sandra win this friendly debate. “I think I’m doing quite well with my magic studies. In fact, let me show you my newest magic skill.”

“Really,” Sandra gives me a suspicious look.

"Move back to where our moms are," I instruct her. I glance at mom, "I've shown this to dad already, so don't be surprised when he doesn't freak out when you tell him."

Glancing up at the top of the tree I'm using for target practice; I pick a branch to aim for. I shift my axe from my shoulder into a proper grip and ready myself to jump.

I hear three gasps as I launch myself into the air and even more exclamations when I use Air Walk to jump even higher into the canopy. Closing in on my target, I stop and use Precise Strike to sever a thick tree branch with one upward swing of my axe.

I'm happy I hit my target, but I'm more surprised that my axe didn't drag me with it this time. I replay everything in my head as I start to drop to the ground with the severed branch. Halfway to the ground, I use Air Walk once more to slow my descent. As my feet touch the forest floor, I'm still trying to figure out what I did differently there.

I was soaring up to the branch I wanted to cut; I shifted my stance and stopped when I was in range. What could've kept me from being dragged along with my weapon?

Did Air Walk have something to do with it? I’ve already tested that my skill helps provide a much sturdier surface to interact with. Would that help stop me from moving, though?

No, but I did stop when I reached the branch I wanted to cut. How did I do that? Was it my mana?

I start to piece together an idea of what stopped me from soaring higher. Subconsciously, I must have formed a mana barrier around my feet like I do to use Air Walk. Only this time, I used the mana to temporarily hold me in place so I wouldn't fly higher, which subsequently kept me from being dragged with my weapon!

I can use mana to lock myself in place!

It will take some practicing, but hopefully, I can figure out a way to anchor myself to the ground when I'm swinging my heavier weapons. That way, it won't matter how heavy I am; I could keep using my movement-based fighting style even with heavier weaponry.

A huge grin crosses my face. And to think, if I didn’t try to show off in front of Sandra, I wouldn’t have realized this until much later.

I look over at Sandra to thank her, only to see her, mother, and Sarette staring at me, mouths open in shock. Something happens to your ego when you leave people dumbfounded. Strutting over to the ladies, I feel eight feet tall.

"Like my new skill?" I ask Sandra with a gloating smile. "It might not equate to the many spells you learned, but I'm happy with it."

“That was amazing!” Sarette finally finds her voice and compliments me.

“You can run through the air now?!” Mom is equally surprised as her friend.

“Yep,” my grin widens.

“That shouldn’t be possible,” Sandra mumbles, leaving me confused.

“I’ll admit it was hard to do, but it’s not impossible,” I tell her.

Sandra shakes her head. "No, I mean, even at your level, you shouldn't be able to use your mana like that. A person's mana dissipates rapidly once it leaves the body. Covering yourself is one thing, but creating footholds to run in the air, that would take a level of Mana Manipulation I can't even comprehend!”

I flinch away from Sandra, who has a crazy look in her eye. "Did you manage to break past the level 40 test?"

“Ummm,” I nervously babble while taking a step back.

"Sandra!" Sarette calls out to her daughter. "Get a hold of yourself. Can't you see you're making Aaliyah nervous?"

Sandra closes her eyes and takes a deep breath. When she opens her eyes again, Sandra has calmed down and has replaced her fevered look with a serious one. "I'm sorry, it wasn't right of me to ask for your skill level like that."

“It’s cool,” I tell her. “You are my best friend after all. I just don’t get why Mana Manipulation is such a big deal. Anyone who plays with their mana enough can get it to level 40.”

Sandra lets out a big sigh. "No, it isn't, Aaliyah. Mana Manipulation is a tier 3 skill, but it levels like its tier 4. I practice with my magic every day, including trying to control my raw mana, and I only managed to get Mana Manipulation to level 23. I haven't leveled Mana Manipulation in almost six months. My master wouldn't tell us what level his skill was at, but he dropped hints he was stuck on its test. My master can't control his mana anywhere close to what you can. Is there some sort of secret technique you've discovered that can help me?"

Sandra looks at me with pleading eyes, making my answer all that more difficult to give. "I'm sorry, Sandra, but I don’t know what to tell you. I just kept playing with my mana and trying new things with it as my skill leveled. I mostly focused on my internal manipulation, but my skill started leveling a lot faster once I could cover myself in my own mana. You probably noticed the skill I gained from it."

“The barrier you always keep around you.”

"That's right," I tell her. "I kept trying to make it stronger and stronger until recently when I realized it was strong enough to walk on."

“I see,” Sandra says, looking like she’s has a lot on her mind. Sandra lets out another sigh after she looks like she’s come to a conclusion. “I guess the only thing I can do is work harder and try to catch up with you. But you did past the first test already, didn’t you?”

“Don’t hate me, but I don’t think I feel comfortable giving out the specifics to my skills,” I awkwardly tell Sandra.

“I understand,” she responds with a smile. “It wasn’t right for me to ask again anyways.”

“I won’t give you the specifics, but I’ll tell you I’ve passed the first test.” Telling Sandra that I’ve reached level 60 in Mana Manipulation might dissuade her from trying to catch up to me. Friendly competition is always a good thing.

Sandra gives me a warm smile, “you didn’t have to tell me that, but thanks.”

“I should be thanking you,” I tell her. “I had no idea other mages had such a hard time with Mana Manipulation. I've could've accidentally said the wrong thing to a mage in the future. I already called the mages helping to melt the snow in Drey criminals."

Sandra tries to hold in her laughter and accidentally makes a snorting noise. I start laughing and everything right between us.

“The two of you make such good friends,” Sarette remarks.

For a second there, I forgot our moms were here.

“The best,” Sandra and I echo each other.

Now that that that’s taken care of, I should get back to my practicing. I start walking back over to the tree I was using for target practice.

“You still want to train more!?” Sarette asks me in disbelief.

"Yep, I had an idea on how I can swing my weapon properly, and I need to test it out."

"But I was hoping the four of us could go back to our house and have tea together," Sarette pouts.

"Sorry, but I still have a lot I want to try out," I politely decline her invitation.

"You shouldn't work so much. Doesn't a tea break sound nice?" Just like my mom Sarette doesn't give up that easily.

I’m about to politely decline her again when surprisingly, mom comes to my rescue. “Don’t even try, Sarette. I’ve been telling Aaliyah that for years now. And besides, if we drag her away from her training right when she has a breakthrough, she won’t be fun to have tea with. Let’s leave her here like she wants.” I make a mental note to thank mom later for helping me.

“Oh, all right,” Sarette relents. “Let’s go without her.”

Mom and Sarette start walking back towards the village but stop when they notice Sandra isn’t following them.

"Is something wrong, sweety?" Sarette calls back to her daughter.

"I think I'm going to stay here with Aaliyah and meditate for a while," Sandra tells her mom.

I can see Sarette's shoulders visibly drop in disappointment. "Fine, be careful, you two."

"We will," I yell, reassuring her.

Sandra moves over to a nearby tree out of my way and sits down. She closes her eyes and starts meditating while I square off with my tree. Both of us aware that the other plans to seriously practice now that we’re alone. Sandra has her searching spell activated so I can put 100% of my focus into figuring out how to utilize my mana without worrying about our surroundings.

I start by swinging my axe through the air a few times, trying to imprint how I stumble with each different swing.

Then, I surround my feet with large amounts of my mana like I do with Air Walk. However, unlike Air Walk, I don’t dissipate the mana after it’s formed. Instead, I force the mana to almost a standstill, locking my feet in place. The restrictive mana squeezes my feet, and I'm able to swing my axe without me being dragged along with it. But this can only be considered a step in the right direction.

I can walk while I have Mana Skin activated because the mana is flowing freely over my body and contouring to my movements. Mana Skin is made out of my compacted mana like Air Walk but still moves like the blood under my skin.

Locking my feet in place may be a step in the right direction, but it's a step I can't make. Mostly because now, I can't move my feet. The laws of motion apply to everything, even magic. Because the mana surrounding my feet is moving much slower than usual, it takes me longer to focus and get the mana moving again to release myself.

I don’t burn as much mana this way, but I can’t afford to cement myself in place when I’m fighting.

There has to be a better solution.

I stand for a moment, trying to think of a new way to approach this, but nothing practical comes to mind. Maybe I need to take a step back and re-evaluate my resources. Maybe looking at my status page might help give me some new ideas. And besides, I haven't checked the exact growth of my skills in over a week now.

LV: 73 Experience:80,549/ 956,780

Health: 2,430/2,430

Stamina 1,184.37/1,650

Mana:651.06/1,020

Vitality: 243.00

Endurance: 100.00

Strength: 152.00

Dexterity: 150.00

Senses: 62.35

Mind: 65.13

Magic: 102.50

Clarity: 78.59

Status Points: 0

Skills:

Tier 1:

Meditation (LV78), Running (LV76), Blacksmithing (LV70), Hammer Skills (LV58), Axe Skills (LV56), Cleaning (LV53), Chanting (LV50), Mining (LV48), Drawing (LV46), Trading (LV45), Cooking (LV40), Dagger Skills (LV31), Wood Carving (LV31), Acting (LV32), Sword Skills (LV31), Sewing (LV26), Pugilist Skills (LV4), Spear Skills (LV2), Alchemy (LV2)

Tier 2:

Sense Mana (LV79), Double Step (LV61), Charm (LV50), Measurement (LV46), Hammer Arts (LV42), Axe Arts (LV36), Writing (LV32), Intimidating Shout (LV31), Mathematics (LV30), Increase Price (LV21), Lower Price (LV20), Steady Hands (LV18), Dagger Arts (LV12), Sword Arts (LV14), Gourmet (LV7), Marching (LV5), Shout of Valor (LV3),

Tier 3:

Expel Mana (LV62), Mana Manipulation (LV60), Precise Strike (LV40), Double Strike (LV40), Weighted Strike (LV38), Flash Step (LV22), Contract (LV7)

Tier 4:

Mana Skin (LV54), Mental Resistance (LV53), Inject Mana (LV52), Extract Mana (LV32), Magic Blacksmithing (LV26), Empowered Spell (LV12), Air Walk (LV6)

Tier 5:

Sense Soul (LV39), Soul Manipulation (LV6)

Tier 6:

Soul Devourer (LV2)

Increased Skill Levels

Blacksmithing (LV70) 3,500exp

Hammer Skills (LV58) 2,900exp

Axe Skills (LV56) 2,800exp

Sewing (LV25-26) 2,550exp

Hammer Arts (LV42) 4,200exp

Steady Hands (LV17-18) 3,500exp

Weighted Strike (LV38) 5,700exp

Flash Step (LV22) 3,300exp

Mana Skin (LV54) 13,500exp

Magic Blacksmithing (LV26) 6,500exp

Air Walk (LV2-6) 5,000exp

Skill Experience: 53,450exp

Crafting Experience: 14,316exp

Fighting Experience: 0exp

Total-experience Gained: 67,766exp

That's some solid gains for my Blacksmithing skills, which haven't seen any growth since I made the general's arrow

, while Mana Skin retook its lead as my highest leveled tier 4 skill.

I can feel I’ve made progress with my other mana related skills but not enough for them to level. They're already at a high level for my age, so I shouldn't get greedy.

Air Walk jumped up to level 6, and based on when I used it a little while ago; I'd estimate the mana cost for Air Walk dipped below 38 for each step.

Despite my gains, whenever I pull up my status page, I always realize just how much I still need to accomplish. Alchemy is still stuck at level 2. I have five skills stuck at their testing levels, along with another two skills almost reaching their next test as well. There are just too many things I still need to work on.

I wish I could split my time more evenly, but certain things take priority. Like figuring out how to swing my weapons without losing control, that is my number one priority.

But now that Sandra has said something, I see my mana skills in a new light. I've always been able to feel the presence of mana since I was reborn in this world. Sure, I knew how rare sensing mana is for most people, but I never thought about how much my talent has helped me grow. Even when you factor in that, I've been practicing for fifteen years; according to Sandra, I'm ahead of her master in terms of mana skill.

I'm confident my mana skills will help me solve the issue with the momentum of my weapons. I just have to think of something new. Kicking at the forest floor in frustration, I uncover a root of the tree I'm practicing on.

Now there’s an idea!

Trees have a strong foundation because their roots spread throughout the ground. What if I try to spread my mana out from my feet into the ground as trees do?

Let’s try it out.

I gather my mana into my feet and slowly extend tendrils of mana into the forest floor. The process is slow because if I lose focus, my mana will dissipate. After twenty minutes of standing perfectly still and focusing on my mana, I've managed to send my mana tendril four inches into the ground. At this point, I realize I can't hold on to my mana if it's any farther away from my body.

I test to see if the mana roots help at all by slowly lifting one of my feet off the ground. A smile crosses my face when I can feel a slight resistance keeping me from raising my foot. Once my foot is four inches off the ground, the resistance fades to almost nothing as my mana roots try to grip the mana in the air instead of the ground.

I slowly lower my foot back down and see what happens when my uprooted mana tendrils come back into contact with the earth.

It takes a few seconds and some nudging with my manipulation skill, but my mana roots eventually re-snake their way into the earth. The mana roots wedge themselves into the naturally slow-moving earth mana.

Now I need to see how much my mana roots help me to deal with my weapons momentum. I adjust my stance, giving the mana roots enough time to take hold again and swing my axe in an upward strike.

The roots definitely help me, but they're too short to offset my strike's total momentum. I'm not disappointed with the results, however. This just proves my idea works. All I need to do is practice more.

“You look happy. Did you succeed?”

I look over at Sandra, who's opened her eyes again. "Yes and no. I couldn't figure out an immediate solution, but with some practice, I should be fine. What about you?"

“I’m trying to maintain control of my mana as it leaves my skin. Let’s see who succeeds first,” Sandra sends me a challenging grin.

“It’s on,” I accept her challenge.

Time to grind some skills!

**********

“You look much better today,” master remarks as I work the bellows of our forge.

"The break was good. I had a little trouble practicing with my new weapons, but I'm working on a solution," I tell master.

"Is that why you brought your sword with you today?" Master motions to my sheathed scimitar resting up against my workbench.

"Yeah, I can't very well bring my axe or war-hammer with me if I can't use them properly. But even now, I'm working on a solution." As I'm pumping the billows, I'm mindful of my mana roots stretching out from my feet.

After practicing most of the day away yesterday, I’ve managed to gain some sense of control over the mana roots. I can extend and retract the roots much faster now. Four inches is still the limit for how far out I can extend them, but this morning I found another use for them.

While keeping pace with mom, I noticed the ground felt slightly off as we ran around the village. We run the same way each morning, and I'm familiar with each rock, stump, and tree root we run past. It took me a while to figure it out, but eventually, I realized even though my mana roots didn't have enough time to burrow into the ground, they still reinforced my footing slightly.

I now plan to keep my roots extended permanently as I do with Mana Skin when I'm outside. I wouldn't be surprised if I unlock a new skill soon.

"I'm sure you'll get ahold of it soon," master encourages me. It's always nice to hear someone has faith in you. "Did you decide on how you want your armor to look?"

I groan into the forge. "Yes, it took me forever, though. That's why I took an extra day off. Mom helped me a lot."

“Your mother knows about armor?” Master sounds surprised.

"She doesn't know armor, but she knows how to work hide and leather. She helped me figure out which parts I need to forge and which I'll need to make with her."

“So, you’re sticking to a lighter set of armor then?”

“That’s right,” I confirm masters suspicions.

It took talking to mother for hours before I had any idea of how I would make my first personal set of armor. I've sold a few sets of plate armor to Kervin in the past, but I've always leaned towards the weapon side of blacksmithing.

That's because there are many forms of armor in this world, and many don't require blacksmithing to make. With magic beasts out there with hides that can block enchanted steel, not everyone wants to be bogged down with a set of full platemail armor.

Master taught me how to make armor out of metal, but it was mom who sat me down and explained the different armor types out there. First, you have defensive clothes woven from magic beasts or animals with strong fur. Next, you have all leather and hide armors, and as the names imply, they're made out of beast hide. You have plate-lined armors made with the previous two materials but reinforced with metal plates to add extra protection. Last is full-body suits of armor that master is accustomed to making.

I would love to have a set of magic clothing strong enough to deflect arrows and swords, but mom said those are more expensive than high tier magic items.

We both decided it would be best for me to stick with a leather plated set of armor. I will craft the metal components then stitch them together with mom.

I explain all this to master while my metal in the crucible properly binds together.

"Metal armor is what saves people," Master huffs. "Back home, if you wore anything else, you’d be laughed out of the mountain.”

“I don’t know master, magic underwear sounds nice,” I joke.

"Then buy your master some, and we'll see how it holds up."

“I’ve seen the dirty clothes in your house, master. No way am I spending good money only to condemn a pair of magic boxers to that kind of fate.”

“Cheeky brat.”

Master and I go back and forth until the alloy is ready.

Now comes the tricky part. I have to craft twenty-three plates to cover specific parts of my body. I need to craft four plates for each of my limbs, two large plates for my chest, four smaller plates for my back, and one plate for a cap. Everything will be cushioned with leather, but the plates need to cover the majority of my body.

I decide to start with the plates for my back because those will be the easiest. To move efficiently, a person’s back needs to remain limber. The four plates will be evenly spaced out, but there will still be a decent gap between each plate so my armor can contour with my body as I run and dodge strikes.

The four square plates I hammer out are the quickest thing I’ve made in a long time.

Next, I move on to something a bit trickier, the plates for my arms and legs. Each plate needs to be rounded to fit over both sides of my arms and legs. The closer I can match the plates to my body, the more comfortable they'll be and offer me better protection.

I need to mold each peace, let it cool down a little, then hold it up to my limbs to see if I need to adjust it. At the same time, I'm doing all that; I think about what would happen if I just crafted hundreds of small square and rectangle pieces and use those to line some armor. Armor like that would offer more protection and retain its flexibility. I might have to try that once I get my hands on some better hide.

Once I have the segments for my limbs completed, I flatten out a chunk of metal and form it into a bowl shape. This plate will be padded the most and used to make me a helmet. I originally wanted to forgo any armor for my head, but mom argued that I should at least have a helmet in case something attacks me from above.

The last two plates take me the longest to make and will most likely need to be adjusted later. Armor that covers the chest is the simplest to make but the hardest to perfect. Chest pieces aren't like what you see in video games. Just because I'm a woman doesn't mean I will form the metal to highlight my breasts. Not only is that impractical, but it isn't structurally safe either.

A good chest piece is triangular in shape for both men and women to deflect arrows and swords properly. The skimpy armor I used to see in games had way too many creases and crevices, and if they were used in a real fight, they would have the wearer take more damage than it would deflect.

The trick with chest pieces is that the better they defend you, the harder it is to move. If I tried wearing a platemail chest piece, I wouldn't be able to bend over.

The chest plates I’m making are meant to overlap each other while still giving me a small degree of freedom.

When everything is done, master moves over next to me. “Finished everything?”

“I think so,” I stretch out my tired arms. The sun is just starting to go down.

“Will you be back tomorrow?”

"I don't think so," I tell master. "Mom has the leather set aside, and it will probably take the whole day for us to get everything fitted. I'll be back the day after to make any adjustments I need to and to start crafting some of the weapons I plan on selling.”

“What about the special arrows; you don’t want to start with those?” Maser curiously asks.

"I was thinking of setting aside the materials I need for the arrows and make them last. I'd rather try to raise my skills a little higher before I tackle the most expensive items."

Master hums in agreement. "Then I'll see you in two days with your new armor."

“I think you’ll be impressed,” I brag a little as I put everything away.

"I don't think so; it isn't full metal after all." Master lets out a hearty laugh. Stone kin and their metal. Apparently stereotypes are the same across both worlds. I wonder if I ever meet an elf, will it be in the forest?

"I'll do my best to impress master then," I say in an over-exaggerated manner. Gathering up the twenty-three metal plates, I say goodnight to master. "See you later, master. Remember, when I get back, we'll have another forging marathon."

“Gods help me,” master shakes his head as he waves goodbye to me.

Walking home, I can’t help but think about what the next few months have in store for me.

**********

5,200 words.

Sorry for the later release. I intended to have this out sooner, but the internet in my area went down, and I couldn't send the chapter through Grammarly until it was back up.

The next chapter will be a small time skip but nothing major. I can't exactly write multiple chapters of Aaliyah standing next to a forge all day.

Tell me what you think below, and as always, stay safe.

Comments

Anonymous

Nice. I was wondering how you'd deal with the momentum problem.

Anonymous

Time skips are fine with me as long as you don’t do months or years at a time without at least some kind of summary chapters

Anonymous

That is a real good solution for the Momentum Problem. Now I'm wondering if you planned it before or after reading the comments about it 😊😂

Andrew

Thank you!

Anonymous

Perennity, it's of course a legitimate word but it comes across as unwieldy in the sentence. Perpetuity maybe?

Dopplerdee

I love the momentum problem but that fact that shes walking around with that contract as a bomb on her neck is.....distracting.

Straven

Loved the friendly banter and competition and looking foreword to where she winds up with the move time wise. Thank you for the chapter.

Anonymous

She needs to wait until everyone is ready to confront Grey.

Runehkt

15 paragraphs from the bottom, damager should be replaced with damage

Anonymous

I'm still not sure why people are so hesitant to reveal stats and skills. Obviously you don't want your enemies to know what you can do, but she's keeping it secret from her, so called, best friend and family. The only reason why you would want to hide it is because each person's test is personal and knowing someone else's "answers" would give you a different test. For example, if Aliyah explained her experiments with pushing mana outside of her body to make a double layered mana skin, then perhaps it would make that test not be available and she would need to come up with a completely new way to expand the limits of mana manipulation.

Anonymous

It is the culture, which unfortunatly does not have to make sense just look at some of the clothes from the past and other things people have done like witch trials. Some things people do are not logical if people were logical about burning witches the Monty python joke about burning the witch would make no sense.

1536539

Thank you for the chapter

Anonymous

I wonder when she will begin incorporating soul power into her mana. We saw the soul eater create a powerful barrier that way and she did mix the two energies when she learned the tier 6 skills so I am eager to see how the two energies interact and what she can do with it, especially considering her talent and use of mana alone.

Stylemys

I'm betting that the tests for Chanting and Mana Manipulation will be passed by opening up a skill like Silent Incantation to let her chant spells in her head instead of out loud. Then Weighted Strike, Precise Strike, and Double Strike together will probably open up a skill like Penetrating Strike. I have no idea how she's pass Charm though, unless she uses it to keep a Scholl inspector from realizing how high level she is.

Anonymous

Thanks for the chapter. By the way the part about a woman's chest armor being structurally weak and not practical is wrong. Go look up shadiversity on youtube he explains it really well.

Thundermike00

How small of a time skip we texting here? A couple days, weeks or months?

Justin

It's going to be saved for the first boyfriend. Lol. I currently do not want romance introduced to this story. Too much else to peruse at this point.

Carl Mason

As far as I am concerned, you absolutely can write chapter after chapter after chapter of Aaliyah at the forge. I love to read these chapters. Especially when they contain technical information, I love it. But I look forward to reading any of this story you put out.

Carl Mason

The best way I think it could be said is "perpetually", rather than "in perpetuity" or "in perennity." It absolutely comes off as unwieldy, it is more ...organic, I suppose, to use adjectives as adjectives.

Jacob

Love how last chapter everyone was talking about heavy armour or weighted boots and your just like nope , she's part tree now

Justin

Really enjoyed it. I like how she shared more than normal about skills and found the new way to use mana, mana spikes! Lots to look forward to. On another note you've been constantly getting out your two chapters a week. Maybe not always on the day you intend, but you notify us and are in a reasonable timeframe. So congrats and good work!

ZaA

If she isn't making something to protect her face or neck she'll need to add some type of stop-ribbing if she's creating armor shaped to deflect (the triangular shape your were talking about).

Carl Mason

I got the impression that the author was speaking of the detailed body print armor that has pecs and abs beaten into it. Or other details. Not necessarily armor that is built and fitted for a woman. You wouldn't expect to find a woman wearing armor that was flat and fitted for a man, it would not work as well for a woman because it sits differently. But overly detailed armor that has nice breasts cast into with a good shape and everything would be just as useless.

Nobody

Shadiversity had a great video a while ago for how feminine armor could both evoke a female form and be just as effective as male armor. He focused on the dome shape to platemail, but the same concept would apply here. The dome is what actually does the defecting, since a flat surface is more likely to catch blows than a round one. In male armors the dome tended to be lower on the abdomen for aesthetic reasons, but there's nothing mechanically detrimental to moving it up to the chest for a more feminine shape.

Anonymous

I didn't even think about the problem with momentum, and her weapons. I imagine she's going to find away to fuse her body with the earths mana and also use that to break through the mana manipulation test. I like the Idea of mana cleats could be useful for scailing walls or slippery surfaces. Also the idea of the tiny squares over leathers sounds kinda like scale mail, but it might be less protective of arrows and piercing attacks. Over all great chapter, and small time skips are good we don't need every day and week of her life detailed.

Anonymous

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Black Unicorn

Nice to see you talking about the wight of her weapons being so heavy and I'm loving how you working on how to fix it as well.

Anonymous

Aaliyah was told about the momentum problem near the beginning by Del. Was it foreshadowing...? Good chapter!

Black Unicorn

That's vary true i know many people that gave times for things and then fail and won't say a thing even when they do post.

Jack the Dream

Head, neck, spine, and heart in that order. Got to protect all the instant kill areas first.

Jachin Nelson

I imagine this armor will be used in conjunction with Mana Skin, using the Skin as almost the equivalent of chain mail, stoping piercing and slashing attacks on her weak points

Ungrave

I feel like "a whole bunch of small squares held together by leather" is just one short step away from making proper chainmail. I'm certainly not an expert in armour but I've spent a great deal of time listening to an enthusiast talk on the subject on YouTube. Also I'm looking forward to when she can run up trees with that mana root skill since that is pretty much all she needs to run up vertical surfaces. Thanks for the chapter!

Anonymous

Bonding with her friend was quite welcome. Yeah I’m not sure how much skill stuff I’d share with Surette. I’m still hoping to see some work with Sandra while working on making that engraving ink. Well time will tell.

Anonymous

thx for chap, dont like that she doesnt get any profit from her mage friend but oh well. also, i thought she would get a bit more exp from crafting. Or it was just me? Also i can see that she is kinda moving to (i hope so) to some kind of mana reinforcement skill for whole body(inner body).

LapisLazuli

As a hater of typical fantasy armor I'm really satisfied with the designs shown here :)

Anonymous

I now plan to keep my roots extended perennity as I do with Mana Skin when I'm outside. I wouldn't be surprised if I unlock a new skill soon. "perennity" doesn't really make sense here. "perennially" maybe, if you want to use that word but you probably just wanted to write "permanently".

Melting Sky

Given that this world's greatest tank doesn't use any sort of internal mana reinforcement, it may simply not be possible to use mana internally in such a manner. Unless I've forgotten it, we haven't seen or even heard of a single example of any sort of internal buffing magic in this world and all of Aaliyah's techniques including the mana roots she is currently working on are all external. The one example of magic that gives me even a sliver of hope that these sorts of effects might be possible is the fact healing spells exist.

Anonymous

You can get very different styles of plate armor which allow for more movement and flexibility, with lighter and stronger metals available wouldnt be a stretch solves her weight issue too.

Anonymous

Thank you. And now for me to wait for another chapter... God I can never get enough.

Anonymous

Armour of small plates on top of leather or hide would work just as well to prevent punctures and cuts provided theres no gaps like if its layered like roof tiles or scales. It would be worse however at distributing force over a larger area as the individual plates are smaller. If the impacted plate is partially in contact or layered on another plate some of the force would be distributed over that/those plates too but a much smaller amount overall compared to one large piece that generally makes up bracers, vambraces, cuirasses,

Anonymous

Plate lamellar cuirasses are a more flexible option for torso armour which is pretty much what you have her making for the back plates but hers are bigger and have a gap. I would say consider filling the gaps with chainmail sewn into the leather as well

Pyrefiend

What would happen if she shaped her mana into runes with just mana manipulation? Most mages couldn't do it but maybe she could.

Anonymous

What she is making is either lamellar or brigandine I suggest you look into them as the plates are suppose to over lap not have gaps. Armor doesn't do it's job if it's not there. Also the plays are rivitwd on not seem on so attaching them should be at dels not at her mother's. Also armor that forms to a womans chest doesn't make it any worse, armor has historically conformed to the fashion of the time, look up codpiece for an example. Shadiversity has a few videos on armor and female armor, i shuggest watching those to know why it's not as nad as people make it out to be.

Anonymous

Also the plates are suppose to be rivited not sewn on so it should be at dels not at her mom's. Auto correct really messed up that sentence.

Stylemys

Or if she simply formed the internal mana structure of the items she forged into the shapes of runes? Everyone keeps saying she's a genius when it comes to that, so maybe she can skip the enchanting ink and draw the rune circuits right into the internal mana structure itself.

Anonymous

maná en runas con solo manipulación de maná yes

Anonymous

i think there was not enough research what it sounds like she's try to make is a gambeson. i liked the first bit the people interactions feet good

Anonymous

No, an gambeson is an pure cloth armor. It does not use metal. However it is very often the inner layer of armor. So you have an steel brestplate or ringmail with an ggambeson underneath. Just an by the way gambeson could block arrows depending on the bow and the arrow.

Anonymous

I had better not wake up to find that you posted the chapter at 2 in the morning your time!!! You should be asleep then and post tomorrow!

Anonymous

Sandra should make a comment about the mana flow inside Aaliyah tools, it would just be a conversation that makes sense based on other people’s reaction to them

Anonymous

So im wondering: is she putting mana into her magic inc? Seems like the most obvious missing ingrediant^^

Anonymous

Yes, but Sandra mana sense skill is garbage :p So she would not be able to analyse the flow of mana in an object. Especially if there is a great distance between Sandra and the object.

Julkur

Now that Aaliyah needs Mana for fighting next to protection and qick movement, she should put more stat points into Magic instead of strength

Anonymous

she uses mana 24/7 no jokes. Not sure what idea author has/had about her future magical prospects but feels to me like she kinda fked herself. Maybe soul eater will save the day?

Anonymous

her mana roots remind me of when naruto did his first chakra training. she prob adjust the skill to walk/run on walls and water eventually

Anonymous

I need to mold each peace - should be piece

Anonymous

Beautiful that the problem with the heavy weapons was solved magically. That way you can also do ridiculous stuff like stopping high momentum targets like.... a dragon ....... later on. I really adore the solution. And the rooting was a good idea. Mana Manipulation should go from big and intern to small and extern ^^

Anon

I don’t know where you got the idea that people wearing full plate armor can’t bend down. That’s totally false. Full plate armor is meant to be very mobile. It is made so the wearer is able to run, jump, and even do flips( saw it in a YouTube video). This is a smithing novel and it pains me that more research wasn’t put into historical weapons and armors. You got close to the problem when you mentioned that armor with creases reduces the structural integrity of the armor itself. By having smaller plates, it produces the same problem. She should listen to her master when he said metal armor is what saves people.

Anonymous

You really should watch Shadiversity channel! He explains a lot about weapons and armor.

lenkite

I have seen folks run, bend and jump in [Full Plate Armor] in re-enactments. Leather just weighs less but mobility is not that impaired.

pipMcDohl

Now that that that’s < 3 that?

pipMcDohl

peace < piece ?

Anonymous

A little bit of research will show that female breastplates were, in fact, designed to contour to display the breasts a little. It wasn't individually, it was basically equivalent to a tight sweater, a pronounced singular bust. And it wasn't sexist, because men's plate armor often emphasized a bulge at the crotch. No joke. They apparently cared to accentuate sexual characteristics in armor back in the day.