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Sometimes I leave the text in the sketch page if I have to  more-or-less finalize it before drawing, which was the case here. I  wanted a gradual page-real-estate shift from Tala-Aurora over to  Bailey/Massak since they deserve some screen time, before implying  they're just going at it hard now, before cutting back to the wolves.

This  whole interaction has been really difficult to stage and panel out. I  had to plan/sketch out actually a few pages ahead before settling for  this one. I hope it reads and enjoyable because, on one hand, Aurora and  Tala need to have this conversation which outlines a few points, given  its her creation and she wants to tell Tala how to use it...but on the  other hand, talking heads is a little plain, and it would feel too soon  to just have Bailey sit on Massak earlier, only to cut away -twice-, so I  wanted to make sure they got a good finish!

Hope you all can enjoy some bear butt!

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DragonKGHT

Won't lie you've inspired me to actually start writing again thanks to your comics so keep up the good work mate

pokediginut

God Bailey and Massak are too much in the best of ways. Massak has quite a lot of stamina, he’s already gone 3 rounds and is already up for a forth

Ahawk95

I always enjoy bear butt 🥰

Anonymous

It’s a good page, you’ve meet your objectives well. If I may give some feedback, it would help if Bailey’s head would overlap on the lower panel. Just some icing on the cake, I’m looking forward see it baked!

Antoine Davis

Looks awesome, I also agree with how you handled showing Tala and Aurora's conversation and showing what Massak/Bailey are doing during it. Since that way people have an idea of what's going on and aren't just left in the dark/since they should have some screen time. Another thing is that I'm very interested in Tala and Aurora conversation, for it does explain some things about this comic/ Predators 1 and that I agree that it needs to happen. Also yeah for it would be good to show them, but mostly Tala and Aurora with the dialogue. But yeah, awesome page, can't wait to see more!

minoan

"There's more than one way to plant a seed, Tala!" As far as flow of the comic though, I think this is a good idea. Rather than a boring exposition dump, you're having that function taken care of via dialogue in the normal way, but the visual with Bailey and Massak serves to explicitly showcase how this plays out in the real world. Emphasis on 'explicitly,' ha.

Synariel

Hope Mask will have enough stamina for spirit wolf butt ^^

Silver Altomare

Tala is good, but I ship Bailey and Massak just a bit more. Of course, there's always the harem option. Interested to see where things go on the long term sense from here. Fun in the moment is enjoyable, but seeing the lasting effects afterwards is heavenly.

MC

That is an amazing page. I love how Bailey is showing off her form and I love the way her tongue lolls out of her month in pleasure. Pleasantly surprised to see how long her tongue is.

Kaizer

So glad there's more Bailey <3

MC

Forgot to add, if the next pages show the wolves and the tribes becoming more willing to experiment, I hope we see some AskaXBailey.

The Friendly Deathclaw

mmm Massak and Bailey really going at it now! love that doggystyle!!

Leo G.

I suspect that someone is gonna end up with a completely unexpected surprise in a few weeks. Wonder how the others in her tribe are gonna react?

Diamondstorm

Bailey doggystyle! YUM YUM GIMMIE! XD

FurryFan

Love that grab on her shoulder and her tongue out *-*

fluffkevlar

yeah its been emphasized a few times in the comic how big bear tongues are! thank you!

Silvador

Bailey just has a fantastic figure for "all fours" poses. It really emphasises her curves and her boobs look fantastic hanging down. :D Every page of this comic is a treat and I can't wait to see this one finished, and what comes next.

River Wolf

I can't wait to see the finished panel. Mph, fluff knows his fans