Home Artists Posts Import Register

Content

Page 45!

This one was a bit hard to frame and fit together, but I think it'll be alright. Hope it doesn't feel too rushed in pacing; I tried to think about having another page between here and Bailey finally being introduced/mentioned, and it felt like too much filler/ padding that didn't add much. I think it'll feel more fit-in with the 2-3 pages following this one.

Enjoy!

Files

Comments

Caspian Yuichiro

The facial expression on tala is great

Iselwyr

Oh he knows hes been watched, come on in!

Khanaar

Busted!

Skyler_darkwolf

I like that cute face she makes.

Ahawk95

No worries Tala, I bone birds all the time, a wolf is a nice change of pace! By the way there’s this bear watching us, maybe she can get in on it too.

WUNP_FX

Wonderful expressions

minoan

I think this is the right time to introduce Bailey, and the right way. I think a lot of the feedback that it was too early last time was due to Bailey's introduction being seen as more of an *interruption* than an addition, derailing a nice scene already in progress. Now that that scene is over there's nothing to interrupt -- we got the first scene, and now we get the promise of even more with Bailey as a true value-add rather than as an interloper. Win/win!

EnterTheHero

Whoops. Looks like she got caught. ;3

Antoine Davis

Looks great, also no it doesn't feel rushed. I do wonder what he was thinking about Bailey whenever he noticed her, also the expressions look awesome.

ghostman

I think the pacing is perfect. Bailey needs to put points toward stealth though.

Diamondstorm

A new challenger appears!

Deciem X

owu face

Blackjack

That "oh crap" look... lol