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DNF 18 Manga -Witch Chapter-(English/Part 1) (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2023-12-01 11:04:46
Edited:
2023-12-01 11:05:57
Imported:
2024-01

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Continue tomorrow...

English is not my native language, so there may be incorrect translations. If so, please point it out!

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Qina

thank you for the translation and improvements! This manga is one of my favorites of all time, when I saw your female mage mangas a few years ago I instantly bought everything you'd drawn and I haven't missed a month since ❤️ the way you draw enchantress here is so sexy I really really love it!

Qina
>>6570486

My editing isn't amazing but here are some errors I found: multiple places: onichan -> onii-chan. First page top left panel: should be "nonsensical rumors" rather than "nonsense rumors" First page bottom left panel: should be "(What the hell, this woman is strangely erotic...)" , missing the "is" . First page bottom right panel: "ya?" is a noise so maybe it's fine, but maybe something like "oh?" instead? Second page top left panel: WTF is used mostly for chat, maybe either write out "what the fuck" or "what the hell" like you did on the first page, or "I can't believe witches really do exist". Also like I put here it should be "do exist" instead of "did exist" Second page bottom right panel: "you smelled me and got excited huh?" - the question mark should be after huh, not excited Hope this helps, this may not be perfect so you can look at other's recommendations too!

rkrk12
>>6570525

thank you!!! I will take your points into account when writing the full version!

Qina
>>6570549

you're welcome! I'm very happy you're doing an english translation for this masterpiece 🙏

Anonymous

Actually, the original version has more of your personal style, and I really like it. When will we see the sequel?

rkrk12
>>6576909

thank you! Please enjoy the new version! There will be no sequel to DNF, but a Tatsumaki manga may be published instead! An illustration manga is paid out as a reward every month, and we are planning a manga in this format.