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feiyin85

Isn't this the same one posted on August 12th?

ムック@サークル(風間道場)

Sorry, feiyin85. This is the same one I posted on August 12. This is the page in the story flow. It is the full size version, Sorry it is the same as what I posted on August 12. I can't post the pages after this one yet as I'm in the process of writing it. Sorry it will be the same. This is my mistake and I will try not to post the same thing this time!

feiyin85

I thought the flow is wrong...is this like a flashback?

ムック@サークル(風間道場)

Yes, I did. I brought the erotic scene first. I intended to draw it in the flow of the reminiscence scene, but it may have been difficult for readers to understand the composition. This is largely due to my lack of study of comics. If you don't mind. Please let me know if you have any advice on how to make it easier to understand after reading it. Please let me know if you have any advice. For example, [there was not enough explanation], etc. I would like to use it as a reference for future works.