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So I'm working on this d.va animation, and I wanted to get your thoughts on it, particularly the slap, I'm wondering if it's perhaps too rough, and am debating whether or not I should remove it. 

Please cast your vote here ( ' - ')/ ~http://www.strawpoll.me/18467459

(also keep in mind this is a work in progress, so the models are jagged due to lack of subdividing and there's no motion blur amongst other things)

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Anonymous

It’s good but I don’t like how at the guy’s ass is in front or how we don’t see D.Va but still a good animation

Anonymous

Good animation but please change the angle,we want to see dva not that dude.

Kurt

I love the slap, I'm ok with the angle but interested if you can find a different one that's more on dva, and I can understand if that would make the animation take longer to finish.

Anonymous

All I'd say is rougher and deeper on the oral.

Burer

Not a fan of the angle

yeero

I hear your thoughts about the angle, and I'll see what I can do to change it 👌

Anonymous

I think the angle is fine.

Anonymous

The angle is actually fine, it’s different from say another typical cowgirl position

HelloDexter

As far as slaps go, it looks pretty gentle. And wow, this is the first time I've seen atm in one of these loops. Gotta say, I like it.

shichaofan1989

This angle and posture is really great! My opinion is that the sexual intercourse of the lower body is the focus, and the slap is secondary. If you want to make a slap in the face, consider the effect of making semen from the mouth and slap it out.

Nyx

I think the slap is to "soft" her head/face does not really react to it like it should but i think its because of your reference. I wanted to search for a good slap scene and exidently found your reference xD https://gfycat.com/wideeyedpitifulfruitbat

parad0x3D

+1 for me in enjoying the angle. It puts focus on the giant cock plowing her, which is good. E: I also don't mind the slapping, or any other rough stuff for that matter, as long as it doesn't feel "rapey". But in this animation, I'm indifferent, cause I don't think it either adds or takes away much from it.

Ribonizer

Yeah I think it's glorious and if anything the slap's not strong enough. Loving the angle too, it's one we rarely ever see

Anonymous

Maybe a compromise? Replace the face slap with an ass slap instead. A bit less controversial perhaps and as a bonus you get a little bit of ass jiggle out of the deal. Voting to keep the angle, though - it's nice.

Anonymous

I agree with this. The face slap is kind of a turn off and I'd appreciate a nice ass slap with some jiggle action a hell of a lot more. That's just me though and I can understand why alot people would be into it. I voted, but whatever you decide will look good!

Anonymous

I love the angle, mating press anal is a rare delicacy. Seconding the change for an ass slap instead

Anonymous

I love the angle and think an ass slap would be better, though the face slap is fine if you choose to keep it.

orion dobledosis

You should also consider making several camera angles of the same scene because it is really amazing. It would be a shame if so much work is wasted in one shot.

Anonymous

does the male has arsehole? this was bugging me a bit when the model was missing something and make me feel a bit disconnect from the scene

HelloDexter

Does having multiple angles double the rendering time or something? I actually like this angle a lot since you get to see the action, but others would probably be great too.

yeero

I will do multiple angles!!

Aerith_FF7re

I would prefer a pussy variant for an alt.

hal0dude7

Personally not a huge fan of slapping her face, though it is rather docile here so I guess I'm indifferent. If it was an ass slap as mentioned by others though, it'd be amazing, especially with this angle it'd be a real sight to see.

JBlume

Rough stuff is fine. In this context, it doesn't make sense because she's already compliant

Anonymous

I just joined as patreon for this animation. Good work More Dva plz

KurashiDKona

Just saying I am an extreme porn collector and I’ve pretty much seen almost everything there is to see, as well as downloading etc, and this is by far one of my fav animations, from like thousands of high quality animations I have seen or downloaded, like holy shit this is the stuff right here 😂😂😂 this animation is easily in my top 5 rn ;)