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LITTLENUNScomic73 (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2023-01-18 17:51:16
Edited:
2023-01-18 18:27:24
Imported:
2023-01

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Please let me know if there is any strange English.😊

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Marcel

Watch out Clumsy! It's a trap! I suppose the bunnies are a trail that lead into a trap. If so, Clumsy should probably say "Oh, someone dropped this", because "drop" as a noun means something different. (example: "It is a long drop" -> "It is a long way to the ground", from a cliff for example). And instead of "Oh, here it is again" she should say "Oh, another one", because "here it is again" makes it seems like she keeps finding the same bunny she just picked up. And the other speechbubbles should then also say "another one" instead of "again". 😊

Marcel
>>4833917

I forgot to mention that "Oh, someone lost this" would also work and it would probably be closer to the Japanese translation. 😊