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Please let me know if there is any strange English.😊

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Anonymous

かわいい😍

Anonymous

No thoughts, head empty. 🙂 In the first panel "expressions" should be in plural. Frog Nun should also say "a doctor of emotions" because every doctor is a doctor OF something. She could also say "I am Doctor Emotion" which would mean she calls herself "Doctor Emotion" And in the last panel Bunny should say "I'm not thinking about anything, I'm in a daze". In English you can use a comma if both parts of your sentence could be a correct sentence on their own. In this case "I'm not thinking about anything" and "I'm in a daze" are both full sentences that work grammatically independent from one another. So you can use a comma to connect the both sentences and make it nicer to read. 😊