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Starfire and Raven pin design lineart (Patreon)

Published:
2023-02-12 14:56:30
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2023-05

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I finished the line art for the pin designs. I'm working on the sketch for the Azula drawing as well so I'll hopefully have that up soon. Let me know what you think of it. I hope you all have a nice day and thank you for supporting me on here.

-quinn


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MMage09 (edited)

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2023-05-17 20:30:15 Looking good! A few things I noticed going from the sketches to lineart, that I hope is just temporary until the final art is done, is some details were lost in the process, especially with the Raven one. 1) The pattern on her glove is gone. 2) The shoelace rings on her boots are gone. 3) The glossy/sweaty spots on her balls are gone. (I'm a big sucker for glossy/shiny skin and clothing, I have a thing for latex so I noticed this instantly lol) 4) The effect under her balls indicating them tensing up is gone. 5) I liked in the sketch of both of them together that their cumshots shot up and met each other in the air making a big glob. And one last thing that I know will 100% not be final, but the sketch of Raven was easier to envision a final result due to the extra shading on her cloak and such which isn't there in the lineart. Some small criticism, if it's even valid at all since it could be all accounted for and i'm just saying this for no reason lol. Just some things I noticed, just don't want those finer details missing as they add a lot when all is said and done. Also hoping for lots of glossiness on their bodies from sweat and other things, just like the last Starfire x Raven artwork with Starfire choking Raven while breeding her, which is fantastic in that department! Also give those glorious cocks and balls all the attention they deserve! *grins*. Sorry for the long write up, but you said you like criticism before so trying to throw a bit out there without seeming like an ass while doing it. Looking forward to the final art as well as the Azula sketch! <3
2023-02-12 17:45:54 Looking good! A few things I noticed going from the sketches to lineart, that I hope is just temporary until the final art is done, is some details were lost in the process, especially with the Raven one. 1) The pattern on her glove is gone. 2) The shoelace rings on her boots are gone. 3) The glossy/sweaty spots on her balls are gone. (I'm a big sucker for glossy/shiny skin and clothing, I have a thing for latex so I noticed this instantly lol) 4) The effect under her balls indicating them tensing up is gone. 5) I liked in the sketch of both of them together that their cumshots shot up and met each other in the air making a big glob. And one last thing that I know will 100% not be final, but the sketch of Raven was easier to envision a final result due to the extra shading on her cloak and such which isn't there in the lineart. Some small criticism, if it's even valid at all since it could be all accounted for and i'm just saying this for no reason lol. Just some things I noticed, just don't want those finer details missing as they add a lot when all is said and done. Also hoping for lots of glossiness on their bodies from sweat and other things, just like the last Starfire x Raven artwork with Starfire choking Raven while breeding her, which is fantastic in that department! Also give those glorious cocks and balls all the attention they deserve! *grins*. Sorry for the long write up, but you said you like criticism before so trying to throw a bit out there without seeming like an ass while doing it. Looking forward to the final art as well as the Azula sketch! <3

Looking good! A few things I noticed going from the sketches to lineart, that I hope is just temporary until the final art is done, is some details were lost in the process, especially with the Raven one. 1) The pattern on her glove is gone. 2) The shoelace rings on her boots are gone. 3) The glossy/sweaty spots on her balls are gone. (I'm a big sucker for glossy/shiny skin and clothing, I have a thing for latex so I noticed this instantly lol) 4) The effect under her balls indicating them tensing up is gone. 5) I liked in the sketch of both of them together that their cumshots shot up and met each other in the air making a big glob. And one last thing that I know will 100% not be final, but the sketch of Raven was easier to envision a final result due to the extra shading on her cloak and such which isn't there in the lineart. Some small criticism, if it's even valid at all since it could be all accounted for and i'm just saying this for no reason lol. Just some things I noticed, just don't want those finer details missing as they add a lot when all is said and done. Also hoping for lots of glossiness on their bodies from sweat and other things, just like the last Starfire x Raven artwork with Starfire choking Raven while breeding her, which is fantastic in that department! Also give those glorious cocks and balls all the attention they deserve! *grins*. Sorry for the long write up, but you said you like criticism before so trying to throw a bit out there without seeming like an ass while doing it. Looking forward to the final art as well as the Azula sketch! <3

quinn935
>>101745637

Me and the person I'm working with to make these pins still haven't really decided on certain details. And since they're going to end up as small pins I had to simplify certain details when doing the line art. like fore example the tense up effect cant really exist because the entire pin has to be one solid object. I'm also not sure really sure how to go about coloring it for this one because I don't really know how the pins even get made. The idea is that they will be separate pins but can be combined together. But yeah, there's still some stuff to work out. thanks for the feedback though.

MMage09
>>101745637

Yeah I understand. In terms of coloring and detail I would have no clue on it either in regards to making it work with pins. I will say, the Starfire x Raven choking/breeding piece I would say is your new gold standard for details and coloring, that is your style at its best!