Looking for proofread (Patreon)

Hello! All the scenes and dialogues are finished, but as I know my english skill reputation from Harem Island, if some of you would like to proofread these texts I'd appreciate ^^.

It's just about fixing grammar/vocabulary, not rewriting the content. I'll directly share the .rpy files so it's better if you're already used to these type of thing so you won't fix like "coding" XD

Attention: You'll be spoiled on the scenario as you can read it, but I won't share the images/animations/voices so it not 100% spoiler :D

As a patron you can use Patreon message, or contact me on twitter or Discord.
@eroniverse on twitter,  Erodraw#3200  on discord.

By the way, I wrote a description of the game, tell me what do you think of it, and tell me of I have to fix some grammar (like in comment for example) I copy/past it on this post: 

__________The page description:

      Confined with Goddesses is a light-hearted story based on hentai culture, in its "funny" aspect. My inspiration is coming from hentai/manga, adult manhwas, and few adult games I like.

Five persons will live the quarantine together:

• The MC*, who already has a girlfriend, he's very horny as she never touched him.
• Berry, MC's Milf teacher very lovable with him but also very frightening sometimes, who is married to a man that is always in business trip.
• Sarena, Berry's oldest daughter, she is the MC's best friend and she has a girlfriend.
• Emma, Sarena's little sister, very disrespectful with the MC, the most popular girl in the university, and she has a boyfriend.
• Valerie, the girlfriend of the MC's father. She brutalized the MC before he gets stronger, but still is very harsh to him. The MC hates her, despise her sexiness.
  (Disclaimer: No married, so no family relationship. he doesn't considers her as his mother)

*MC means Main character, or Male Character.

Current Tags for the first update: 2DCG, 2D animations, oral sex (cunnilingus, and blowjob), Male protagonist, MILF, Quarantine, Big tits, Big ass, Tsundere, Yandere, best friend, teacher.

Tags to be added in the future: Cheating (No NTR content), Footjob, Female Domination, Male Domination, Vaginal sex, Anal, Camgirl, Tits job, Thigh job, Pussy job, Lesbian... (And more)

The MC wants to be loyal to his girlfriend, confined far away from him, but will he resist to these goddesses living with him? Should he "try" to resist? How will evolve girl's intentions toward the MC?
You will see how it turns out by playing Confined with Goddesses! 

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Courage guys, it's so close! :D

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Concerning the images, There is a underwear outfit of Berry in the next next update (They will wear different outfit at different place/time of the day, but not on this 0.1), but it would have been weird to see it but not when she's dressed so I added it, and also made the dress slightly transparent :D