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The Conceptual Deck - Chapter 8 - Just Desserts (Patreon)

Published:
2022-01-10 14:54:38
Edited:
2022-03-10 02:09:15
Imported:
2024-05
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I hope you enjoy the early chapter! Please note that a while complete re-write is unlikely, and I will attempt to keep edits to grammar and typo corrections,  the chapter isn't final until its published online! 

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Robert Meta

The rewrites I was referring to only applied to the early chapter. I won't be rewriting any content already posted to SB/SV. Once something is posted on those sites it's the final version. The early chapter has already gone through my usual final edits as well, but isn't what I would consider to be set in stone yet. The likely hood of me drastically changing anything is very very small.

Eldenguy

Nice to see him starting to get on his feet. But I think he needs to make him self a close hand weapon. Even a baton or bat mixed with some hand tazers would work. Also adding pepper spray as a second feature to the gloves would work too.

William H
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Maybe gloves as a further backup. Some two part epoxy (concept: 2 parts to activate effect) plus tazer (concept: incapacitating shock) so it only shock if he gets both hands on target so he doesn't accidentally shock things he doesn't mean to. Focusing on the "incapacitating" aspect of the shock could handwave any possibility of over shocking/stressing the target and accidentally killing someone.